Reminds me of 'fleshlight'...I really don't like the name, it doesn't sound as good as 'RemedyX'.
This song is horribly quiet! You can master it a little louder buddy, i'm not feeling the music at ALL. :(
Even though it is an 'ambient' drum n bass track, it sounds a little bit too subtle. The reason why its called 'ambient dnb' is cause of slow and soft pads and a hard hitting drumline. I didn't hear too much of a drumline...
The reaosn behind that is that you didnt have a flow in the song. Yes, the synths are nice, but, yoiur drums, are not. Stick with one kit, man! The change in drum kits and string works and the pauses totally throw off the 'ambient' feel. This song sounds a little more random than anything, im sorry to say.
The drum line you bring in with the e-piano synth you have goin on at the end is great. Now if only you had that same feel going through the entire track, with the same synth, and everything.
Its good to be diverse, but don't completely change instruments every 8 or 16 bars. It doesnt make a structured track.
My summary of this track:
The feel is thrown off. there could ahve been a hell of a lot of more work put into the song with the breaks and the drum work, instead of using reason presets. 6/10 effort.
Original, to say the least, though. But not to my liking. 9/10 originality.
Diverse? Eh, same statement as the originality bit. 9/10
Pretty clear, but i think you should master it a little bit louder. Don't be afraid to push it.
9/10 on clarity
Overall, you get 7/10...try to make the song have a more solid base.
PS: Don't take any of this personally, I'm just being honest.