YA MAN
WOW
WOW
FUCK WOW
this is just ama fuking zing!
i make trance...but none of it is acutually this good. if u wanna go compare u can go right ahead and check it out. Any one should agree...that this is pwnage.
I like how the song flowed and it wasn't atotally stiff song(like it has the vibe man)
im shocked at how good this is.
P.S. after i wrote this review i just basically sat here and listened to this tune over and over again.)
theblackhawk--_--
thanks alot man, :) glad you liked it, more coming soon
heh
when i first started on ng, i put a shitty song on ng, and next thing u know its in the top 5. N e ways....
relaxing,and yes it is very danceable. Trance usally has a solid foundation for the beat, and to be honest, this is a dance track. its completely flawless.(but not perfect). Another thing for your next trance track, trance is usually dramatic(so it seems to effect your emotions) and if it isnt its called abstract trance.
I call this unique.
so i call it awesome.
theblackhawk--_--
heh its been a while
well i kind of like it. i see that yer using those claps again...good kick, but try adding a closed hat on the kick,and plz do sumthing aboiut that bass...its too damned low. it almost sounds like an annoying rumble in the backround.
well really since im damned tired right now i cant really tell u n e thing else. besides telling to u to follow what u think would sound good. if u think the song is good, mostly other people will too. Just go with the flow and yer emotions. thats what makes artists truly great.
theblackhawk--_--
ok poet
lol man
yer remaking the fear factory song? o dude u so gotta doit...FINISH! NOW! o i mean...
plz finfish it my good friend i would like to see how close u get to the original song with different synths. thank you my good sir.
(o and its just a tad bit faster than this one)
sorry bro, im not finishing it. but i WILL do a techno from scratch soon, and prolly use ideas like this one.
this is the only one
this is the unique one of yer songs. its the only one i actually liked. I happen to actually like the cheap 8 or 16 bit sounds. Quite original. if you wanna send me the FLP file so i can remake it(causae i rather like it) plz send it to jadanpaluck@msn.com.
i look foreward to it.
theblackhawk--_--
well my friend
i liked it alot. the only thing i kind of didnt like was that part that went du-du-du. if u understood that(which i bet u didnt). i liked the rough sounding open high hat, but i think that the snare was too low. I think in my honest opinion, if u added an arp and a kick ass main chorus, and if u sped it up by like 30-40, it could be used in a dance club. good job, but try to use more variety in your du-du-du thingy. o and the hats were overpowering. plz turn them down man.
P.S. plz review my new song'Ripped and torn. its my first attempt at abstract DNB and i think that yer critism could help.
-theblackhawk-
ok dude
ok i like yer style,(even though u over use it) and thats the only thing. most of yer songs sound...how should i put it...alike. even though i like it it disturbs that knowing the next song i liten to of yers is goin to sound a lot alike. so good work, keep it up, and y dont u try a diff genre, like indutrail.
i like to stick to what im good at. but i might be doing either a techno or maybe industrial next (or dnb)
AHHHHHHHHHHHH
YOUR BURNING MY FUCKING EARS
lol sry
it was kool and sweet at the same time.
then u tried to be cool with yer little fast high hats and yer fancy basslines.
wow
my ears are killing me
now i wanna kill sum one
u just made me into a serial killer
(but still, good job)
i submit my fuckups and this was one =P
well my friend
you always review my shit so im gonna review yours! yay(YOU BETTER THANK ME OR ELSE) o sry that was my inner demon...
anyways
u called this dance eh? well its more of a laid back...relax pimped out beat. the only thing i didnt like in this song is the "open hat". its too rouhg 4 a song like this and add sum reverb to the clap. make it sound soft....like a pillow lol.
its pretty sweet.
there. i reviewed your stf now we r even
lol thanks for the review, this was basically a hybrid dance\trance thats why its slow and chilled out.
dude?
wut vocals? i didnt really hear any other than these poorly done scratching sequences. and the drill_NB beat sequence is highly overrated, many use it cause its 'cool'. i used cuase i thought it was awesome, but then i realized that everyone was using it. get sum drum synths together, actually TRY to scratch sumthing that would be worth it, get better at slicing, etc...etc...the critism could go on. just make yer songs have some beat at least, and if u think that theres already enuf beat, then dont make it so glitchy and annoying! ADD SUMTHING ELSE
-theblackhawk- if u read this i just pwned you
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