PERVOK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[My Hell (Final)]

not bad!

in fact, i like it! wow, since im a drummer, what i look for in a song is the drums.
but, this song made the guitar stand out very nicely. great guitar work! now about the drums....
do u have another snare sample that u could have usded instead of using the same one over ad over again? just to make the drums sound more than real?
other than the snare, i could say that this song sounds like it was reall recorded(drum wise)

so great work

theblackhawk--_--

Demon-Slayer12 responds:

Thanks, I don't have another snare but I could try tweaking it a bit in my drum program.

[Ellipses Loop (15secs)]

frigging amazing

to be honest, when u reviewed me shit and u told me to review yers, i thought that youd be a total n00b. but damn man. this is amazing. great piano work, simple but nice flowing drums, i olike the reverb. but if u wanna make this more like a loop dont make the tamborine kick in. have ot going the whole the way through. Add a bassline man, trust me, u hear that shit when u have 2 12 inch subs hooked up to yer somputer.
So make a nice bassline on a bass guitar or something.
great job, i think that u most defiantaly will get prtal front page with this.

theblackhawk--_--

AdmiralConquistador responds:

The bassline is a good idea, I don't know why I didn't do that for this loop, especially since the bassline for the original song is soo cool...

Hey man, glad I earned your respect :)

-ac-

[Analogous Phattus (4 min2]

very nice

good drum work! i'm a drummer so thats what i look for in a song.... good drums according to genre. You made it just right, nice smooth crash, good flowing beat, and nice snare rolls, and i know how u could make the piano nicer. if you use FL studio, which it sounds like you do, put on some reverb(soft reverb, not long or short, kind of in the middle) and put a very,VERY soft delay on it.
Then u will have a nice smooth, soft sounding piano.
good work on this.

theblackhawk--_--

[Strange Love loop (12secs)]

very nice sounding

the bells gave it a very nice sound to it, and since its 2:30 i cant really play it loud so i cant hear if u but a good solid bassline in there. the arp is nice, but the beat is lacking. ill tell u how, too. the kick isn't solid enough, the clap breaks are in really weird places and u should have a nice soft crash at the begginging. and an open hi hat, u need that too.
good job.

theblackhawk--_--

AdmiralConquistador responds:

I agree the kick is too soft, but the claps are not in weird places, just not in the quarter note places, they are syncopated or in a roll. Also I didn't think it needed an open hi hat, I have a pretty intricate hat pattern running that I guess isn't too audible. Soft crash at the beginning would be a good idea though, yea. Thanks for the constructive criticism, I'm glad you enjoyed the song and thought I did a good job. Anyway if you haven't heard the song yet... it's further down the list. :)

-ac-

[Stolen Souls]

hey gore......

..........if you ever want drums, you really should ask! I would be more than willing to record some drums parts and send them to you so you can use them in your songs. kind of like a collab. y'now?
msn me at [e-mail]
or AIM me at jadanpaluck

if u wanna c my skillz just check out my drum soklo or send me a song so i can drum along to it.

if u accept, u have made me happy man.

GREAT FUCKIN WORK

theblackhawk--_--

GoreBastard responds:

Awesome, that would rule like a whore on crack! I'll get in touch as soon as I write something good enough.

[Policy on Rape]

yeeeeeaaaaahhhhhh

just like my last review,
send this shit to a label!
uh, yeah.
the emotion is excellent in this song, even tho the only complaint i ahve is the begginging. It seems to drag on too long and its too empty for that period of time. Like have some slow electric drums at that period or guitar or bass stabs. Puce is really talented, you guys should keep collabing!
great work!

theblackhawk--_--

[Tri-State Area]

wow

good recording....im not too sure if the drums are recorded or not. but still,

NICE

this shoudl be famous man! i could see this on the radio.... nice recording, nice drummer, nice guitarist and nice electronic FX! And dont forget about the singer! the lyrics are well written!
seriously though.

find an internet radio station and get this on there and GET A LABLE. you could be famous, becasue normally i dont like this shit if its amateur, but this is great! like.....WOW FUCK

KEEP THIS SHIT UP!!!

theblackhawk--_--
(can u do me a favor and review my shit? i really need the critism and now i have lots of respect for you....so yeah)

[DIE YOUNG!!!]

welcome

to the audio portal!
you made me guilty...saying that no one reviews yer shit.....
lol this is funny but thast it, no offense.
kind of good guitar, and funny sounding lyrics! i couldn't understnad shit and it was so funny!
but try to add sum drums, get FL studio and add sum drums to it. keep it up and welcome,

theblackhawk--_--
(geta better mic for your voice)

[EuroBrat-My Enigma(NuroGLrmx)]

not bad at all dude!

of course, i never heard the original.
So, i thought the notes in the begginging were very readable. I wasn't too amazed until the end when the main chorus build up hit. wow. you know how to make it all sink into someone and make them dance! But, at that part when the open hi hat kicks in, id add a ride whenever the kick hits. it makes the song sooo much better. if u wanna c what i mean check out most of my songs.
and i would add an ending.(like the main chorus filtering out.)

[Pandora - Tomorrow's TodayBETA]

everything u say?

heh heh heh heh.....
ok ill do jus tthat.

ok im liking the smooth techno beat, this really in the begginging doens't fall under trance, its more like infected mushroom shit. and i love infected mushroom, you should check them out. u might get inspired, they specialise in mostly acid and psycadelic trance. That little main lead that u always use is good, BUT, for some reason in this song i find it a little overpowering in the begginging. I like the fact that near the end of the song u have a new snare roll! very nice, gavce it smoothness. Thats what trance is about dude, and u gave it that. The pads in the backround are nice, they give it that little feel, y'now.
now i dont know if u used a crash or not, but it sure ain't powerful enuf if there IS one. The crash is supposed to define the breakdown, the buildup and the chorus and final breakdown from each other. it was good and very smoother transistions, but need a litle more powerful prgressions and a big, powerful, crash at the main chorus.
i hope i covered everything.

theblackhawk--_--

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

thanks for the great review bro, its gonna be the only one, idk if im gonna submit the full version, i guess i will, i cant tell if people are even noticing the song lol