PERVOK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Ellipses Loop (15secs)]

frigging amazing

to be honest, when u reviewed me shit and u told me to review yers, i thought that youd be a total n00b. but damn man. this is amazing. great piano work, simple but nice flowing drums, i olike the reverb. but if u wanna make this more like a loop dont make the tamborine kick in. have ot going the whole the way through. Add a bassline man, trust me, u hear that shit when u have 2 12 inch subs hooked up to yer somputer.
So make a nice bassline on a bass guitar or something.
great job, i think that u most defiantaly will get prtal front page with this.

theblackhawk--_--

AdmiralConquistador responds:

The bassline is a good idea, I don't know why I didn't do that for this loop, especially since the bassline for the original song is soo cool...

Hey man, glad I earned your respect :)

-ac-

[Tri-State Area]

wow

good recording....im not too sure if the drums are recorded or not. but still,

NICE

this shoudl be famous man! i could see this on the radio.... nice recording, nice drummer, nice guitarist and nice electronic FX! And dont forget about the singer! the lyrics are well written!
seriously though.

find an internet radio station and get this on there and GET A LABLE. you could be famous, becasue normally i dont like this shit if its amateur, but this is great! like.....WOW FUCK

KEEP THIS SHIT UP!!!

theblackhawk--_--
(can u do me a favor and review my shit? i really need the critism and now i have lots of respect for you....so yeah)

[DIE YOUNG!!!]

welcome

to the audio portal!
you made me guilty...saying that no one reviews yer shit.....
lol this is funny but thast it, no offense.
kind of good guitar, and funny sounding lyrics! i couldn't understnad shit and it was so funny!
but try to add sum drums, get FL studio and add sum drums to it. keep it up and welcome,

theblackhawk--_--
(geta better mic for your voice)

[EuroBrat-My Enigma(NuroGLrmx)]

not bad at all dude!

of course, i never heard the original.
So, i thought the notes in the begginging were very readable. I wasn't too amazed until the end when the main chorus build up hit. wow. you know how to make it all sink into someone and make them dance! But, at that part when the open hi hat kicks in, id add a ride whenever the kick hits. it makes the song sooo much better. if u wanna c what i mean check out most of my songs.
and i would add an ending.(like the main chorus filtering out.)

[Pandora - Tomorrow's TodayBETA]

everything u say?

heh heh heh heh.....
ok ill do jus tthat.

ok im liking the smooth techno beat, this really in the begginging doens't fall under trance, its more like infected mushroom shit. and i love infected mushroom, you should check them out. u might get inspired, they specialise in mostly acid and psycadelic trance. That little main lead that u always use is good, BUT, for some reason in this song i find it a little overpowering in the begginging. I like the fact that near the end of the song u have a new snare roll! very nice, gavce it smoothness. Thats what trance is about dude, and u gave it that. The pads in the backround are nice, they give it that little feel, y'now.
now i dont know if u used a crash or not, but it sure ain't powerful enuf if there IS one. The crash is supposed to define the breakdown, the buildup and the chorus and final breakdown from each other. it was good and very smoother transistions, but need a litle more powerful prgressions and a big, powerful, crash at the main chorus.
i hope i covered everything.

theblackhawk--_--

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

thanks for the great review bro, its gonna be the only one, idk if im gonna submit the full version, i guess i will, i cant tell if people are even noticing the song lol