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12:28 at night....

...ok lets get this show on the road.
Nice little ride/techno sounds.
the main lead was nice, but it was missing something... try playing main leads in octaves to make them fuller.
dont be afraid to have trance leads that r really high. thats what they r meant for dude. high peaing emotional melodies.
The arp thingy was nice, even though the beat wasnt really the kind of beat saying 'This song is gonna be awesome! be compelled to listen to the rest!'
you need to make a more driving beat. the song wouldn't be a head bobber if it wasn't for the beat. for give the beat some credit and make it powerful.
The main leads seem too high in filter cut, and by this point i thought that you'd bring it down.

In the drums, try a simple 4x4 kick beat with open hi hats, fancy side instruments, and a clap every 2 beats.
then add closed hi hats on the kicks to make it more dignified and powerful.
The fancy beat is good for the begginging, but then you gotta break it into a simple head banger beat.

great song man, nice happy melodies and fancy techno-ish drums :)

theblackhawk--_--

MattBlair responds:

Hey there dude, thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I may publish the version that I fixed with your comments. Listen to some of my other stuff, as I will yours.

Later

WOAH

nice dude, first off, getting the oringinal song.

The kick and industrial begginging was extorindary!
Woah this is frickin evil as i listen.
nice breaks, nice drums. nice chewey feel to the drums.
The instruments shoulnt have been so distorted...

Awesome, dark wave/industrial/dance/trance/ drum n bass song man.

Great music. i hope that you keep making music, cause i for one, would be listenin to it!

theblackhawk--_--
PS drop by and check out my msuic, maybe leave review or 2!
thx

here yo review man...

...the phased sttrings and way over FXed instruments were really nice.
The water drops were a little too loud or SOMTHING cause it seemed like it didnt fit.
Then it had a nice propelling beat that fit into industrial.
wow that was ... EVIL!
i love that part, but i dont know y everyone uses that crash sample... i honestly hate that damned crash sample, but ill live with it if its all you got dude.
try looking for another one.
The high hats were nice, very loose yet tight feel... or could just say that they sounded 'fresh'
The guitar was nice, and really, REALLY dirty.
i like that.
doesnt really fall under rock... this song doesnt fade into trance and then into rock dude.
This is dark wave ambient fading into industrial!

NICE
i gotta try this somethime soon.
The string just adds straight to the beat.
The guitar started to sound misplaced now...
Like it was random.
And then either the song just STOPPPED or it restarted.

well, buddy, theres a review 4 ya.
hopefully i covered the whole main grounds.

theblackhawk--_--

ehhhROFLCOPTER responds:

mcuh greatful ness. i thoguht about the loud crash didnt really sound that good. the blur effect wasnt very nice. every uses that cuz its in dance, i am more of a fpc |cymbals fan. thanks for the review. appreciate it. =].

wow this sounds different

on my speakers lol
i see you finished it... you added some cool percs and shit WITHOUT my help so am thougholy impressed....
remember, dont give up dude!

theblackhawk--_--

man

send me this song.
the .flp file that you have of it, send it to jadanpaluck@msn.com
i have an idea that will have ppl listenin to yer stf.

hey man

thoiught that you were gettin lonely over here... if you want ppl to recgnize your stuff you have to advertise more and write more music!
listen to some DDR and that trance CD that you have to insir yourself... if you have an idea, just run to your computer and slam it down!

LOL

you reviewd yourself....
god you must have been drunk as fuck

ManSpider responds:

HAHAHAHAHAHA! Probably!

great but...

...i prefer loop no 1.
but yeah this is heavy but the drums arent hard enough....

>:D

ManSpider responds:

Cheers mate! If we use this in the online band, I can't wait to hear your drums with it.
RRROOOAAARRR!!!

I LOVE THIS ONE

ok i would be so in favor of this one man.
great harmonics and melodies, the drums are too simple....i can fix that though....hehehehe

ManSpider responds:

Thanks mate. I'm looking forward to hearing your drum work on this one.

EHHhhhmmmsfklasd

dude.
its close, but no cigar..no offense or anything.

a couiple notes are off but just one friggin note or more and its really bugging me.....

RRRRRRRRR

FIX IT

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

no worries, i know ur right, its in key now, but i cant seem to get the last half of the melody right.....

its gettin further in there..

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