12:28 at night....
...ok lets get this show on the road.
Nice little ride/techno sounds.
the main lead was nice, but it was missing something... try playing main leads in octaves to make them fuller.
dont be afraid to have trance leads that r really high. thats what they r meant for dude. high peaing emotional melodies.
The arp thingy was nice, even though the beat wasnt really the kind of beat saying 'This song is gonna be awesome! be compelled to listen to the rest!'
you need to make a more driving beat. the song wouldn't be a head bobber if it wasn't for the beat. for give the beat some credit and make it powerful.
The main leads seem too high in filter cut, and by this point i thought that you'd bring it down.
In the drums, try a simple 4x4 kick beat with open hi hats, fancy side instruments, and a clap every 2 beats.
then add closed hi hats on the kicks to make it more dignified and powerful.
The fancy beat is good for the begginging, but then you gotta break it into a simple head banger beat.
great song man, nice happy melodies and fancy techno-ish drums :)
theblackhawk--_--