PERVOK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Opera REMIXED!!]

so...

...im listening to it. And im enjoying the nice lyrics and the filtered drums. Now i think it would be awesome if it filtered out slowly. instead u kick it straight out into the open with the clear beat. Nice, but would have been better with a filter.

So then As i listen more, i like the slicing job u did on the lyrics, sloppy, but good. Then u add the main chorus instrument. I like it, but it sounds too empty. And witht the drums, i would have really like it if you used an open high hat, instead of a closed hat.
Maybe add sum reverb on the snare and crash. No, add ALOT of reverb on the crash.
To make it alot smoother.

other than all of this bullshit that is coming out of my mouth, or out of my fingers if u wanna put it that way, its really good. Keep it up!

And another thing.

Focus on being smooth. Thats what makes trance trance! Electronics and smoothnis. And i think that u almost got it down.

theblackhawk--_--

DJLezlee responds:

Thanks a lot for the review. that 'bullshit' as you call it is actually very helpful. You know I really like your reviews. Thanks again.

[Down by the Sally Gardens]

yeah...

...niiiiiiiiice...its like...ambient...so nice.
its like...youre all by your self and your walkin down to the water,where this tune is playin. thats what it reminds me of. i love this, so calming.
but then again, i find anything calming, like dark ambience, ambience, and weird enuf, some kinds of heavy metal i can sleep to.
beautiful fulte playing man,i would fucking PAY to hear this.

yeah.

i'd pay.and in this world thats rare.

theblackhawk--_--

Triskele responds:

WOW thanks for the positive feedback...

[personalsobstory]I've been trying to decide what I want to do with my life, cuz I'll be off to college soon...I really want to pursue celtic music with all my heart and soul, but I'm not sure if I'm good enough to make a living off of it...thanks for giving me new hope guys :*) [/personalsobstory]

:D

[Simon Creek Set]

wtf?

its like a...bongo solo. weird enuf.
It would have been better if u started with the violins an shit, then u have the 'bongo solo' that u have there in the beggingin. O and even though it was pretty bad song structure, tell yer drummer that hes pretty good.
:)

theblackhawk--_--

Triskele responds:

Heh, he knows it :D

Yeah, we really didn't think the solo fit well, but it was so damn good...ah, well, be sure to check out our other stuff on here :D

[~\\Slow Song//~]

errrmm

how did this get 2x platnuim? I think there was a little too much of you dling yer own stf too much...

PizzaFence responds:

no, actually i swear i did nothing. I just logged in one day and found someone had done it, either they wanted to fuck with me.. or 2,052 people really liked it.

[Close Combat]

FUCK

GOD DAMN IT FUCKING PEICE OF DUDDLY FRIGGIN CUM SPITTIN BASTARD! sry. God yer the DNB master and then u step into trance. And you STILL own anyone i know at it.

I hate you. but i love you.

theblackhawk--_--

[Acid Function]

yeah

i was listening and enjoying the little drums and the soft chorus. Then the little koto type intrument came in and i knew it would be good. Now what would make this good and solid, is a good bassy and loose beat,is what i thought next. And...

Bang.

It hit me. I love those drums, but i dont like how many limited patterens there are on them. Your drums are good, but they need variability.

And another thing. U gotta have an instrument that pulls it all together. Like a good solid tech string/ Orachastraic string.

other than that, perfection is at hand my friend. I know u can make sumthing better.
Even though this is almost godly in itself.

theblackhawk--_--

Always-Dark responds:

thanks my friend.

-Allen

[A-Team Remix]

YEAH

A TEAM ON DRUGS!!!
thats what it remided me of dude.

yeah. i liked it.
a lot.
i love you. actually, i take that back.

sorry if i scared you.

theblackhawk--_--
woah its like im on acciiiiidddd

DJLezlee responds:

lol Yeaa! It would be funny to meet a Bong-using BA!

[Crisis Zone: Upgraded]

yeeeeeaaaaahhhhh

thats the way we do it.
smooth transitions and i like the dark strings, they add sum nice shit to the song, but just one thing. I luv the drums(as i already told u) but they need more variations.
Sentece vocals alawys make songs better.
Simple words like go, or fight, makes the song better.

good job,
theblackhawk--_--

Karbon responds:

hey man, thanks for the tips, im glad u liked it

[Wilted Dreams Ver 3]

awww shiiit....

...i feel as sick as fuck so ill just review this then...i dunno. I can't beleive that u actually made...another one. U must be bored. I tripped out on that hardcore panning part.
Yeah...

theblackhawk--_--

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

why u feel sick?

and another one what? song? or version of this lol.

and the "hardcore panning part" at the end was pretty hard to do, but i think it ended way better than the old outro.

thx for ur review bro

[My world map]

good

very good for a world map(maybe if there was little bunnies on the world map and it was all happy n shit and there was...well....happieness)And thats about it. World map themes are usually not ahppy. Kind of a medium happy thing. i hope im makin sense. Very diverse, good job on that. But another thing. Too much progression. Game themes usally start with the main chorus, almost in a loop. I would like to see u try to make another world map theme.

theblackhawk--_--

grahf677 responds:

lol bunnies... thanks for the review i will be sure to make the next one more realistic at least for world maps