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one question

drum machine or real drummer?
which one did you use?

nice guitar work dude.

theblackhawk--_--

Scribbler responds:

Actually, it was a loop created by a friend of mine: Orodreth. He used Proppelerhead's Reason to create the loop.

Thank you for te review.

hmmmmm

congrats on the a-bots weekly #1!

now, to the song.....
really repeptive, but thats what trance is, eh?
but still, its nice to have a little variety here and there, maybe more patterns.
the bells could have been an octave higher, in my opinion, to make them stand out more.
the synth voice you used is nice and calming, but again could be played in octaves or could have been louder.
the guitar stabs are nice. the right volume, right anything. no complaint there.
the euro trance backround square lead is very nice. nice fx there.
the piano truely makes this relaxing.
a little more special FX though, like fall downs, rise ups, blips, space pads would have made this song a lot more formidible.
you could have made a really pretty snare build though with a flanger on it, just to define when the chorus hit.
maybe some woman vox lyrics would have made this really the full potential that it could ahve been.
well there ya go ma friend.

Congrats again on the no 1.

theblackhawk--_--
(you owe me a revierw now lol)
great work

f2x1 responds:

ThanX for review ,i listend your stuff too and it great, i even suggested you in a collab!
About the woman vox lyrics , i would like to have those but i cant , and snare is my weak spot!
Right now i experimenting with Reason 3.0 and Fruity Loops 5 but it kind of not going anywhere!

oooo yer pushing it........

......im gonna punch you.

hard.

in the face.

right in the baby-maker.

lol im kidding.

BUT OF COURSE YOU KNOW IM NOT

lol you owe me a dumbass review now.

good job.

theblackhawk--_--

DJRunaway responds:

Ouch, you owe me a new face :)

Greetz,
DJ Runaway

PS. Thanks for the review!

YA

DANCE PARTY BITCH!!!!!!1111oneoneoneone

anyways.....
great work on this man.
if this was 'real music' i guess i could be on yer back for it being so empty, but fuck man, thi sis nintendo!
exact replicas!!!
i like the bleeping basslines, but even though the drums were very nice, they could have changed from tribute to tribute.

wow......this brongs back memories....and im only 14!
still, the nintendo was the best...

GREAT WORK!!!

theblackhawk--_--
you owe me a review now....hahaha

tedJohnston responds:

thanks for the review!

'real music' eh? and no, these aren't just recordings i ripped off of somewhere hahaha...they are the synths in my program. yes, video games forever!

thanks again! cheers an g'day.

-Ted Johnston

attractive name!

it mnade me click on it.....

whast with the squealing?
if thast an effect, you can tone that down a bit.
other than the squealing, i would called this song one of those songs i could sleep to. great work!

theblackhawk--_--
(maybe you can drop by my audio and give a review or 2)

Dj-Zabar responds:

yea the squealing is an effect. I liked the squealing, but i like lots of weird shit. I tryed really hard to keep this song ambient. thx for the review.

good

but honestly man you could have cleaned up the recording at least a little bit.
nice double kicks.
but you used next to no cymbals, be a little more creative when it comes to the cymbals there, thast where most of the talent a drummer uses is there.
(believe it or not)
all im getting from this though is that you were a little too happy when u got yer double kicks and you practiced one hell of a lot with them.

so good double kicks, work a little more on the actual skill.

good work

theblackhawk--_--
y'now your hands still exist when u drum.

FlameMesial responds:

The cymbals were a pain. All the way through, I played my hihat along with the drums. But I had to cut down the quality so the file size could fit. That blocked out the hihats. Thanks anyway.

OMGWTF

HOW COME YOUR NOT FAMOUS!!?!!?!!

HUH!!?!!?!

ANSWER ME!!!!!!!

.....

i love you.

Anywyas, now for a real review.....
the bass to me in the begginging seemed kind of....cheap. i dont know how to explain it. the bells were nice. the drums filter was very, how do i put it, not really unique, its been used, but wow. u took it to a new lvl. When the full drums kicked in, i wanted to make a new song right then and now.

bam.

i was inspired. amazing man.
the guitar was very well written, beautiful harmonics and strings. the strings were very propelling. made the song very....firm and full if u kow what i mean. when the beat stopped, i almost cryed.

do u know y?

CAUSE THE SONG WAS OVER!!!!!!!

dude....seriously. advertise an shit and get yer self known, cause u by far aare one of the top msucicians on here. of course, we all need improvments somewhere, but with you, since im tired, i can find no flaws.
great work!keep it up foo!

theblackhawk--_--
PS:now u owe me a review lol

randomkarmagenerator responds:

Thanks for the comments. I'm glad you found it inspiring. There isn't a guitar in this, the one instrument that may sound similar to an acoustic guitar is actually a kanun.

BAH

U STOLE THIS OFF OF PSY-BOT U IDIOT U JUST TOOK IT AND SPED IT UP!!!!1111one

lol just kidding this is awesome.
great work with the delayed bells.
the drums could sound a little more dirty for this song if ya know what i mean.
great work, u should go review a song or 2 of mine :)

theblackhawk--_--

Psybot responds:

Whoa!

i scared me there before i got to read the text with small letters.. lol.

i didnt have enough space to write my name into the tracks name. heh.

i will go check out your stuff. right away.

Thx for your review =D

//Psybotronicle Waste\\

very relaxing

but it made me wanna dance. But it wouldn't be good on the dance floor;its too happy.
The pad and the acid sounding FX were very nice, i like the chords and melodies used, but still i could have taken those same chords and turned it into one of the most depressing trance songs i ever heard.
So, for your next song, maybe use the same chords, but try to make it depressing. it would be really interesting. The beat was nice and satisfying, but it lacked the old fashion trance beat complexity and the beat breaks.
Nice pad, nice lead, nice melodies, nice chords, nice solid kicks(even though i would still but a closed hi hat each time the kick hits) the clap was nice but could use a lot more treble, and the bassline was subtle but very filling in some weird strange way.
Great work man, but as always, remember that every artist has room to improve.
you should check out some of my songs man, review a couple.
thanx

theblackhawk--_--

woah

not bad dude!
really good actually!
If u added a clap every second beat i would totally dance to this(u just made the clap come in too late). but y did u export it at a such a low quality?
do u know what? u should check out my music man.

theblackhawk--_--

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