thought id stop by...y'now ,leave a good review.
make you feel all good n fuzzy inside.
The arp was, good.
not great, it seemed like it was a normal quadruplet arp. The violin playing was magnificent and the quality was great.
if only i could use drums in a trance piece like this, eh?
The drums are begginning to get pretty monotonous.
ill jsut lay it down pat.
the break ins are pretty iffy, in fact, i dont sense any break ins.
it just...gets right to the beat.
add sum break ins or fills jst to make it more smooth, or at least make more beats.
not just 2 patterns.
and the open hi hat on the snare is kinda bugging me.
wow, right about now it hit all emoish metal on me.
it got all freaky with the FX and the dist SLAYER guitar.
damn, i had to stop the song, cause i had to help my dad do somethig, so i never got to hear the end.
well, ill just ASSUME that that was near the end, so heres my summary.
Notes: Too repetitive, maybe if you slowed it down and made it into a industrial/ambient trk it would fit.Also, fool around with different patterns with your arpeggios, make it sound a little more customized.
Arrangment: neds more patterns, fills, break ins, FX, whatnot.
Drums(im big on the drums, if they dont sound good, i wont like em) and like i said, the beat was a little too monotonous.
So, just a little variety.
Mastering: Needs more work there.
When the song reaches the climax, on the monitor, it should say that that it only comes up to a little bit over half at the climax of the song (the lodest part).
so, good luck with future projects, and i hope i didnt offend ya.