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[Dj_Seri-Power Struggle]

much better.

but still needs a bit of fine tuning:P

great work.

DJ-Seri responds:

:P thx

[wiped out(final)]

didnt wanna review a loop.

so here.

nice dub beggining...it had the acidish feeling to it.
but the snare roll was kind of sudden, to be hoinest, and almost random sounding.
the hats also sounded random, and the open hi hats sounded like they were hitting every beat?
weirdness.
maybe it was what u were going for, i dunno.
try putting the open hat at every half beat, instead of every beat.
but then

BAM

nice hardlead piece man, if it was about at a comfortable speed of 190-210, and if u had nice lops (and by loops i mean NOT fl presets, like Drill_nb) and a solid bassline and more notes instead of an awkward pause, i would say that this is a good canidate for Drum n bass.
too slow for my liking and it took too long fo rhte lead to come in.

my recommondenations:
dont use FL presets too much. in fact, try not to use them at all. if u use them , FL users will autmatically know if you are using FL or not. that goes with Plugins like Sytrus and Wasp.
Try screwing with the sound waves...u might get a sound u like.
so, in all....

good song, actually.
just need to be a little more 'open minded' if u will, and get sum more instruments :p

great song!

6/10

sonicxtreme responds:

aleluia man finaly i got one of your review..anyway ill put my mind on it tnx...

[Smooth Dance Part 1]

nice.

you have to DL it to play it!
lucky bastard...yer gonna get DLs....

[2 much base 4 u !!]

you wanted a review

so here ya go

the first if very sick, i must say, but for some reason, where you rarely used FL preset samples, for some reason it...almost sickened when i heard them.
maybe its cuase ive been using FL for 4 years and i just hate those sounds now...

but it IS good, dont get me wrong.

now, the phat bassline, is like, wow.
gets your head movin.
But, when most of the synths kick in, this weird snare comes in...
like,
REALLY weird.
its like a cheap synth snare. and i dont quite like it, really.
You bring in a nice funk line near the en of the song, and i thought it sounded like crap(according to the first notes) but, after i gave it some time it sounded HELLA good!
thats pretty well written, ever so simple, but....

...music doesnt have to complicated to sound good.

this is a phat beat man...amazing work.

keep it up!
theblackhawk--_--

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

frickin right! it is about time i got some honesty. i like people who tell it like it is insted of this is perfict there is always room for improvement. i didnt like this song vary much but then ppl are like this is great and im like NO IT ISNT. but you tell me straight up. nice review

[Euro Wave *-*DEMO*-*]

OUCH

ah....

it WAS doing good...but since im a friend of yours...ill tell you flat out.

most of the samples you used were flat out, out of tune, and it sounded pretty disturbing to me.
i think ill send you VST you wanted now...might save you from this again...

[Dj_Seri-Asian Rave(Remix)]

tsk tsk

and you complain about ME having too loud of a kick....

tsk tsk.....

anyways....
i dont know, but your songs always seem to have really REALLY weird mastering in them.
it seems like you have a serious compressor problem and if too many loud things are going at once it makes the song quieter (in all aspects) and kinda gives it a weird feel.

its kinda bothering.
i hear a vanguard in the arp. nice touch there.
same for the lead, but the lead sounds weird in itself.
the notes dont flow to me.
(with the arp, that is)
i also see that in your chorus, you push the bassline too far up in pitch. it doesnt really have any bass there

:/

the acid is lovely tho, lovin it.
and i love that clap...i think i have that clap, but i just suck with FX.

so my advice.

better speakers, better mastering

good job man.

theblackhawk--_--

DJ-Seri responds:

lol thx for the helpfull review, yes im having some problems with mastering right now, i dont know why, my speakers are playing tricks on me...anyways, i need a break and ill come back full force thx

[Unleached Darkness]

hell yeah

your first 100 DLs man.

congrats :D

[§Zeth§ Awakening]

OMG lonely one!

only one review?

sheesh, her ya go, i feel sorry for you.

very dramatic sounding, the nice cymbal clashes were nice, and the voices sounded ridiculously real. im sorry, even though i DONT like the note structure on this, im still gonna give you what i think that this deserves (regarding effort and such)

the instruments had a nice delay, but i wouldnt exactly make the delay on them that....powerful.

right about now im trying to figure out if you are having this loops all the time or if its actually still progressing...im thinking that its loop.

i might DL it just to check if it is or not.

great, but the notes just didnt work....sorry.

good job though!

theblackhawk--_--
PS i have a new trk that you might like on my 'theblackhawk2' account. its called Humanity--_-- and its classical/trance. please check it out, eh?

[Pandora Tranquils crazy solo]

why did u not use this?

hell man i couldve taken that riff and written a trance song that would make your shit, fart, piss, burp and spit at the same time.

i demand that you finish this.
or else send it to me and my little greedy hands (hehe)

good...but i hate when only one instrument is playing...unless its drums.
lol.

theblackhawk

Pandora-Tranquil responds:

should be in ur email, have fun!

i didnt make a song with it cuz it wasnt good enough for me =P

[Mixed Emotions (with solo)]

hell yeah

behotch, this is da oomph in oomphizzles.

lol.
great guitar playin man, amazing work!
thanks for adding the guitar!

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Hahaha thanks man.I just thought it would sound kinda good.Your original was pretty cool.Thanks again.