Hmm.
Make this song at least 5 minutes long and add more to the percussive elements of the song; I can hear the drums because I'm paying attention, but I shouldn't have to. I should be able to tell that there's some hi hat work and everything without even really paying attention to the track, dude. I can't even hear that stuff, and that square lead was super loud D:
Good work though, I like the breakdowns and whatnot. The number one thing that bugged me about this track though was the length! I'm sure that since you make psy/goa and your name is Psycedelic, I assume that you listen to quite a bit of goa. You had an introduction, one build up, and one breakdown. Usually goa/psy has like... 5 or 10! This song had quite a bit of potential to be a great trip track, but the length kinda ruined it dude. Don't be afraid to make these tracks 5-10 minutes long, man :)
Good work, I may come back to your page in about a few months, because I'd love to do some zoomers to this if it was more refined :) Keep it easy;
-Zenon