PERVOK's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Cat in the Hat]

Hey chu.

I dont think that i reviewed any of your songs before.

first off, this song is pretty screwed up man. I could swear that your like, a schizo or something.

:P

its good, and trippy. it would have been so much better if you like threw in a hidden beat.
Like, made it encoded and have like have 'beat boxing' with the words.

oervall, good. But i wouldnt call this music.

theblackhawk--_--

CaptinChu responds:

1. It's not music. I explained that. It was a project for school.
2. You're, not your. By saying your, it is stating possesion, whereas using you're is stating an acronym for you are. Sorry, I'm kind of a grammer freak! :/

It's not to any real beat, actually, so I don't know how I could get a hidden beat... The last "The Sun's" just happened to be two beats each, though. Strange how that works out, eh?

CAPT*IN CHU FOREVER!

[Bouncy]

You lucky bastard, you.

I have to DL it to hear it.
Nice arp and FX in the begginning.

I like the style that you used, but i personally dont like Drill_NB.

other than that...

great work!

theblackhawk--_--

johnfn responds:

Thanks for the review.

The Drill_NB is pretty much the only thing I've got for drums... so meh.

Why am I so lucky? :P

And thanks.

[Bloodrise]

yeah man

simple drums ;)

nice guitar man, the name ifts very well.

Give my regards to Zeth.

great Playing man!

theblackhawk--_--

speedmetalmessiah responds:

Yeah I just wanted a nice simple beat.Zeth comes up with kick ass names so again thanks man.Thanks for the cool review.

[Andvarinaut]

very clean

good quality, but it seems like there are quite a few notes that you could have touched up on.
maybe push the frets harder in some places.

good job overall.

theblackhawk--_--

Tancrisism responds:

Why thank you.

[Despair in F minor]

:O oh no

you made a new trk and i didnt even know...i almost feel guilty

time for a long ass review, boi

Percs = goldy, because right now im having trouble sleeping, its been like 2 days since ive actually had a full nights sleep...that percs make everything so..calm.
the guitar is also good, but im not too sure if its the guitar or the percs that are doing the 'clicking' sound.
its kinda buggin me now.
I think somewhere in the begginning you started to bring in an acid synth, but im not too sure.
it might have just been me gettin into the music.

woah.
the song just like, looped, and i didnt even notice it.
damned good, bro.

so my definition of this trk:
Instruments: well chosen, and very soothing. almost like a suspense song.

Percussion: very smooth as well, but the clicks kind of bother me, even tho it seems like they have a meaning to them all by themselves.
Kind of the climactic part.

arangment:
Amazing.

theblackhawk--_--
I always enjoy your music LJ.
keep it up.

LJCoffee responds:

Thanks blackhaw... I mean Z3N0N :)

I know I took forever to respond to your review - I'm sorry about that - I've been pretty busy lately and I didn't even think about checking for new reviews until the other day.

I'm glad that you liked this track - This was recorded pretty much all in one shot - then dumped back out without any real editing - It started as sort of a test to see how I would far if I ever needed to perform live and after it was done I liked it and figured I'd stick it up on NG...

I'll drop a line and catch up in an email sometime...

Later!

[Shit In My Pants]

sweeet

if this song doesnt get diamond, im going to hurt someone.

funny shit, dude

Laiderdaiv responds:

Let's see what happens 2 years down the road, shall we? hehe.

Thanks for the review.

[Dj_Seri-Power Struggle]

much better.

but still needs a bit of fine tuning:P

great work.

DJ-Seri responds:

:P thx

[wiped out(final)]

didnt wanna review a loop.

so here.

nice dub beggining...it had the acidish feeling to it.
but the snare roll was kind of sudden, to be hoinest, and almost random sounding.
the hats also sounded random, and the open hi hats sounded like they were hitting every beat?
weirdness.
maybe it was what u were going for, i dunno.
try putting the open hat at every half beat, instead of every beat.
but then

BAM

nice hardlead piece man, if it was about at a comfortable speed of 190-210, and if u had nice lops (and by loops i mean NOT fl presets, like Drill_nb) and a solid bassline and more notes instead of an awkward pause, i would say that this is a good canidate for Drum n bass.
too slow for my liking and it took too long fo rhte lead to come in.

my recommondenations:
dont use FL presets too much. in fact, try not to use them at all. if u use them , FL users will autmatically know if you are using FL or not. that goes with Plugins like Sytrus and Wasp.
Try screwing with the sound waves...u might get a sound u like.
so, in all....

good song, actually.
just need to be a little more 'open minded' if u will, and get sum more instruments :p

great song!

6/10

sonicxtreme responds:

aleluia man finaly i got one of your review..anyway ill put my mind on it tnx...

[2 much base 4 u !!]

you wanted a review

so here ya go

the first if very sick, i must say, but for some reason, where you rarely used FL preset samples, for some reason it...almost sickened when i heard them.
maybe its cuase ive been using FL for 4 years and i just hate those sounds now...

but it IS good, dont get me wrong.

now, the phat bassline, is like, wow.
gets your head movin.
But, when most of the synths kick in, this weird snare comes in...
like,
REALLY weird.
its like a cheap synth snare. and i dont quite like it, really.
You bring in a nice funk line near the en of the song, and i thought it sounded like crap(according to the first notes) but, after i gave it some time it sounded HELLA good!
thats pretty well written, ever so simple, but....

...music doesnt have to complicated to sound good.

this is a phat beat man...amazing work.

keep it up!
theblackhawk--_--

MarioMusicMaker3 responds:

frickin right! it is about time i got some honesty. i like people who tell it like it is insted of this is perfict there is always room for improvement. i didnt like this song vary much but then ppl are like this is great and im like NO IT ISNT. but you tell me straight up. nice review

[Dj_Seri-Asian Rave(Remix)]

tsk tsk

and you complain about ME having too loud of a kick....

tsk tsk.....

anyways....
i dont know, but your songs always seem to have really REALLY weird mastering in them.
it seems like you have a serious compressor problem and if too many loud things are going at once it makes the song quieter (in all aspects) and kinda gives it a weird feel.

its kinda bothering.
i hear a vanguard in the arp. nice touch there.
same for the lead, but the lead sounds weird in itself.
the notes dont flow to me.
(with the arp, that is)
i also see that in your chorus, you push the bassline too far up in pitch. it doesnt really have any bass there

:/

the acid is lovely tho, lovin it.
and i love that clap...i think i have that clap, but i just suck with FX.

so my advice.

better speakers, better mastering

good job man.

theblackhawk--_--

DJ-Seri responds:

lol thx for the helpfull review, yes im having some problems with mastering right now, i dont know why, my speakers are playing tricks on me...anyways, i need a break and ill come back full force thx