Reason is THE DEVIL.
LIKE YOUR MOTHER LOLOLOLOLOLOL
Haha, I joke, I kid.
I'm going to be critical, so don't take this personally :(
I have an issue with your crash cymbal. It only echoes once? Wtf? It would be better if it lasted longer, you know? Like 8 or 9 echoes, and not just a 'DUN-dun'. I want 'Dun-dun-dun-dun-dun-etc'.
The funk melody you had in the beginning was great. Screwing around with filter frequency and resonance sure is fun, no? :)
When you brought in the bassline, I thought it should have been more definitive. All I could hear was a bass sound, the echoe you had on it was rather distracting and took away from the overall feeling of the funky bassline that you had. Try to keep basslines more solid, you know?
It took a rather long time for you to bring those trippy hi hats, and even though, they weren't really that trippy like! We need flangers, we need reverb, we need pitch bending, we need those things to be kick ASS! Not saying they were bad, they added a good amount of groove, but they needed to be more 'goa-ish'. Eh?
When you brought in the full beat with the funky acid line, I was like 'yeah. Now this is fucking cool'. The groove just set in, eh?
Next you bring in this long pad like bass synth? I don't know how'd you describe it... but it causes the sounds to mesh together. It would be good to keep the bassline you had going, and after that bass is all solided up, then at that part you could drop the acid line, and keep that other part pad thingy going. It got really hard to enjoy at the end of the song, there was too much to focus on.
Good work, I am impressed. This is some of the best work I have seen from you yet :)
Keep it up, or zeus will summon demon dogs to eat your toes then spit them out to savage bunny eaters.
-zenon-