Hell yeah!
I thought this was going to be some kid of noobish thing... but then the groove set in and the guitar riff started to get all synchopated and stuff.
Awesome , I really like it. Blows away anykind of funk or chill music I could do :)
Keep it up!
-zenon-
MY FIRST REVIEW! :') Thanks Zenon, your kind words have pushed me so far! :D You gave me confidence from the very start, thanks :D
I owe you a review
Not just cause you reviewed me, but because you are a very sexy man.
Yes, you heard me.
Lol, jk.
Awesome work, I can just see an orchaestra just pumping out the sound to this. The melodys are very nice, and everything is perfectly placed and mastered.
I never knew what you use to make music... we should do a collab sometime :) That would be badass!
-zenon-
PS, so what do you use again to make music?
I use Reason 3.0. I'd definately be up for a collab at some point :)
Thanks for the review!
Mastered for sound systems?
This is the best mastering I have heard you do so far. Keep this kind of compression up!
As for the song itself, the beat didn't quite make me feel very satisfyed, but the melody was great, but the volume levels between the melody and the bassline are kind of unbalanced.
Melody = turn up, basline = turn down a bit, or make it lower.
Good work!
-zenon-
hehe thx, i had some help from martin for mastering i think i got the hang of compression now lol thx again
Tsk tsk
It was alright... I'd like to see more than a remade version, though.
You could have least put the effort in to make it a remix :P
Good work, overall, very dancy :D
-zenon-
PS: Work on your compression some more! Your so close to getting it poerfect, but i still hear imperfections when it gets cluttered.
haha nah not remixes :P im too lazy
Its pretty good.
The beat is pretty good, but the only 2 complaints I have about it is that the quality is almost painfully low, and your clap is a little loud.
Good work!
-zenon-
I understand that .. man ive made some edits. but im not sure if i could just directly replace the song without deleting your comments and stuff!!
I still love you.
You heard me. You might see me drop the soap pretty soon on purpose if you keep making pieces like this.
I thought the beginning was a perfect intro to a glitch classical track. The whole reverse sounding sounds with the koto sounding guitar.
The melody in this song is so dissarranged and mangled... it almost sounds like theres no end to the melodies, they just keep puring out, theres so much to listen to, and I keep have multiple orgasms. Dammit LJ, your music is hurting my penor.
I think as great as this track is, I believe that i would be great if you extended another minute or so, and then have a small 4 bar break or so... and have some weird FX fade in, with maybe the violins and maybe a pad playing and then bam.
Glitch drums and synths galore. And i would be happy. And this song would be the best, and i would play to hear it for free.
Awesome work, and i'll be sure to find a few minutes of my life to get that 2 bar thingy done soon. Evne though im still a bit confused about it.
Sweet work LJ!
-zenon-
Drop the soap? I suggest you use powdered soap... it's harder to pick up...
hahahahahaha :)
When I was first putting this together I had intended on breaking into the fast paced glitch work but then at the last minute, I decided instead to just switch to a more traditionally orchestraic sound for a few bars - I thought it work out well.
As far as that few bars thing goes - no worries - send something or not, either way it's all cool - in fact, If you would, just send a bit of a song and I'll use only your work with nobody else's stuff to pollute it - I bet it'll kick ass.
*stunned*
I love that bass synth. You also have that little bell thing that i use in a lot of my songs! You must have snuck around the DX10 a little bit too long in order to find that sound ;)
Everyone here is saying that you should collab with me, but your saying that your a little bit too nervous n stuff.
I'll await an email anytime your ready. Its in my profile.
Now, to the song. Amazing breaks. Amazing drum work, amazing bass synth, and orgasmic synth lead! Its so dirty and infect i dont wanna touch it with a 40 foot pole for fear of catching leprosy. I love it :D
The song in itself is an amazing piece of work in itself. You will dominate the portal in no time :)
Fucking awesome work!
-zenon-
I was just strolling around the DX10 and i found the preset 'music box 2' and it like, sounded exactly like the one you use. I just added some FX n stuff :D I love that synth too!
Its an honor to get a review from you, man... now only if B0UNC3 and -API- and them stopped by this page. Then i would probably shit myself.
I might contact you in the future, but no where anytime soon...
thanks for the review! much appreciated!
You make me sad....
:(
Seriously man, you've gotta watch what file you submit...
(I don't even like this remix that I did :P)
Contact Denvish or Wade and tell them that you accidentally submitted my song, so they can remove it.
Be a little more careful next time, methinks.
(if your wondering about the scoring, the reason why i didnt put all 0s is cause i cant diss my own work :P)
I should huh.... good idea Jadan :D
Its all about me?
Hell no! Man, i haven't barely seen a song that you haven't reviewed.
Man, that is commendable. You deservea goddamn reward or something. Everyone knows you, and really, to be honest, I think you blow me away at drum N bass.
Seriously this stuff is SICK! I l ove the arps, the fast paced drums, the only 2 things that would make you the best artist in the world:
A big kick ass bassline that just vibrates your chest, and a vocalist.
Then i would call you god. But for now, i'll just say that you are one talented fucker :D
Awesome work!
-zenon-
YAY! Well man you are the shit now man!
It's true though your WAY better than me! One you have reason 3.0 two your PoE ZENON REMIX Was just magnificent! Well I know it was a remix but it was the best remix i ever heard! So trust me man you are way better than me man! I didn't review alot of your stufff because you didn't review mines either but who cares you don't need retarded reviewers like me. I'm just a nobody. Your way V'er than me and thats all there is to be said man! Well dude your V'er than i am if you want to talk to me on AIM then it's V man. But if you don't oh well since you don't ave you Screen name up.
Oh well...
Keep it V man!
The world is to V for me and so are you.
V-_-v-_-V-_-v-_-V
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Hey man!
Usually, i write long reviews :)
So lets see what i can do.
(oh, and, try not to take any of this personally...your a really cool guy)
I liked the scratches in the beginning. I thought it was gonna lead to something very quick, so it followed its genre. DNB is usally very fast paced, but i feel as if it starts at a slow pace at about 100 or less BPM.
I like the song in general, but remember to change the notes of the bass, not just the choir.
Try to make it out a little more lively. Remeber that the first kind of Drum N Bass was jungle, which was governed by drums, bass, a small lead, and vocals. Drum n bass artists took out the lead, and the vocals, and simply had a drum, and a bass.
The drums were good, but i think it needs to be about 20 or 30 BPM faster. The bassline, i ADORE that bass synth. But i would truely love to hear its full potential. I just hear a bass bump every so often. When i should hear an entire bass riff, man!
Add pads in the backround, some glitches, awesome drum licks, and make the bassline fuller and make it follow the voice!
Good work, but like every musician, you aren't perfect. Get practicing! ;)
I can see you doing amazing works in the future :)
-zenon- or Zenonpi...whichever you prefer :P
Thanks for the Review man! ill do my best to make my song at its best
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