why did u not use this?
hell man i couldve taken that riff and written a trance song that would make your shit, fart, piss, burp and spit at the same time.
i demand that you finish this.
or else send it to me and my little greedy hands (hehe)
good...but i hate when only one instrument is playing...unless its drums.
lol.
theblackhawk
should be in ur email, have fun!
i didnt make a song with it cuz it wasnt good enough for me =P
hell yeah
behotch, this is da oomph in oomphizzles.
lol.
great guitar playin man, amazing work!
thanks for adding the guitar!
Hahaha thanks man.I just thought it would sound kinda good.Your original was pretty cool.Thanks again.
*cracks neck*
lets get this show on the road.
very powerful, sounds very Reasonish
very amazing, but for some reason the snare seems a little too...low tuned.
very driving, the tympanis will have this beat in my head for a while.
whatever your using for a main chorus instrument, i think that it sounds like a trumpet or saxophone, it sounds a little too fake.
to be honest, i would have used something a little different, but it fits in VERY well. so thast your choice.
the part when the percussion breaks off is a little of a let down.
it could have been more dramnatic, like when it ends, on the first beat, have a big whoop ass BOOM.
same for the end, and you could have had it progress downhill after that.
y'now, make a decent ending.
when the drums kick back in (bak to that part) i would have changed the snare drum pattern.
it got REALLY repetitive. and knowing me, if i was the drummer in this song, i could think of so many fills and stuff that i could do. thast what i do in my band class, and i think thast what you have to do here man.
Improvise. yes, sure as hell it has to follow the main pattern, but you have to make it more interesting. change the crash cymbal patterns, maybe throw an offbeat somewhere or add a tympani roll at the major break ins/break outs.
this is an amazing song, but i see so many flaws that would make this song absolutaely perfect.
great freakin work man!
theblackhawk--_--
PS you owe me a review lol.
*Cracks toes*
It was actually a trombone as far as i remember (Main chorus), and as i said up there, I was just testing my new soundfonts to see what they could do.
Yeah, I mostly suck at the ending and i also happen to be bad at variating the drums, I'll take the critism to me so i can improve in my next song.
heya!
lol. duke nukem, he was great.
the guitar and drum hits in the begginging are very well timed, unlike some of the work that i have seen from you guys earilier. great work on that!
the timing changes are wow! very heavy metal fucking club!
FUCKING JUMP PEOPLE!!!!
great work!
theblackhawk--_--
Wow. With those words, and those scores, you've truly confused me. But, I'll go with the words - Thanks!!
hm
the phased lead that you use in the begginging, is really nice.
the beat is a little...too industrial andnot fullfilling enough.
The pad was really...REALLY ear piecing. i wouldnt call this too much of trance..its a mix between industrial and techno.
the strings were nice, but trance doesnt have breaks in it. the breaks in trance are supposed to define the break downs and build ups.
So im actually waiting for a nice build up.
it didnt really climax, cause it didnt have the climaxed feel.
Y'now, you needed to tone down the strings, and make a better vibe beat (traditional 4X4 kick with open high hats on the odd beat and a clpa every secdon beat.)
the you needed a really big sappy lead, to climax it off.
a lot to improve on (ive never listened to your music b4) but still really good.
great work,
theblackhawk--_--
man i totally forgot about build ups GAHH.
well...
i would kill for a g/f...lets just say that whenever i tried to ask a girl out my friends would always beat me to it.
so congrats on that
now to the song.
filtered drums. usual for you.
The arp came in REALLY soft, almost amazingly soft.
i coulnt really feel the bass.
I thought that the filter would come out really hard in the arp, but it turned out there was none, or that you had just not really touvched it yet.
the chords were nice, very nicely arranged.
Now i sit and wait for the break down/build up.
wait for it....
wait for it.....
nice bells piano syunth sounds by the way.....
wait for it....
damn it fell again.
you have to make this happen a little faster, the breakdown shouldnt take forever. it should take a tops of what, 15 seconds or less?
The TS404 arp is kinda gettin annoying...i would have let it filtered off completely and brought in a more powerful synth for the arp when its building up.
When the chorus hit, i see that you tried to pull a Toby emerson(if you never heard of him go to garageband.com and find out, he is better than any artist i know, and that includes DJ tiesto) anyways, nice, and propelling chorus, but you have an uncertain knack for not choosing powerful enough instruments. no offence or anything, you just gotta work on that part.
everything is great except for arrangment of the song, the FX used, and the instruments.
fix those and you will have a new fan...
...me.
theblackhawk--_--
keep on puttin man!
PS. nice. my kick works out very, VERY well in this song lol
Hehe, I use your kick allot now... atleast untill I somehow get lucky and find one of my own that sounds good. With this song, I was ultimately just trying to keep it simple (I think it only has like 30 patterns or so), but as far picking the right synths, I like ub3r suck, (btw, the main lead is actually Vanguard, its a really nice VST instrument). That TS404 thing I actually just came up with while I was working on the drum intro (I usually make the main melody and pads and stuff first, arrange them to sound good, and then add on the rest of the song). Wow, i've been so low on ideas lately, don't expect another song for atleast another week, but dont' worry, i'm not giving up, lol.
Thanks again for the review:)
nice start but awkward 4 a loop
The drums were very Retro. i usually dont use that style, but w/e. nice old fashion touch.
The quality seemed very low. like you exported it at 80kb or sumthin.
anyways, the main lead is great the notes are very commonly used(the way they are played) but it gave it that familiar trancey outlook on life.
The bassline was nice. after it looped around...3 or 4 times, i finally relized that tehre was 2 basslines going at once, or a bassline and a bassynth. i dunno. very nice touch.
What i would do (in a full version) is have a dance-like song that has NOTHING to do with the chorus play in the build up, and then the chorus plays(very dramatic of course, leads, basslines, drums, and pads all goin, maybe an arpeggio or 2) and then a break down, then a calm part of the song, thena nice little break up, things are goin haywaire,(only for like 8 beats though) and then the chorus(maybe a fuller more trancier version, y'now, really high peaks ad whatnot, and then it just hits like a ton of bricks, and then you slowly break down the song like the way you built it up for one hell of a solid pice of trance.
try using that technique. it works well, and its common.
but try throwing your own litle twist on things here and there of course ;)
theblackhawk--_--
keep on puttin
ok thx
kool
i love mario themes but this seems to go kind of off beat...
im actually trying to animate(spenind lots of time and making it good) and im considering using sprites...
maybe a combination between some cheap demons, mario, and X-men.
so you might see a submission in a long while :)
I know what you mean.I might re-do it but add bass next time.That should help out the timing.Thanks for the review man.Good luck with your flash hope it goes well.Make sure to let me know when it comes out.
12:28 at night....
...ok lets get this show on the road.
Nice little ride/techno sounds.
the main lead was nice, but it was missing something... try playing main leads in octaves to make them fuller.
dont be afraid to have trance leads that r really high. thats what they r meant for dude. high peaing emotional melodies.
The arp thingy was nice, even though the beat wasnt really the kind of beat saying 'This song is gonna be awesome! be compelled to listen to the rest!'
you need to make a more driving beat. the song wouldn't be a head bobber if it wasn't for the beat. for give the beat some credit and make it powerful.
The main leads seem too high in filter cut, and by this point i thought that you'd bring it down.
In the drums, try a simple 4x4 kick beat with open hi hats, fancy side instruments, and a clap every 2 beats.
then add closed hi hats on the kicks to make it more dignified and powerful.
The fancy beat is good for the begginging, but then you gotta break it into a simple head banger beat.
great song man, nice happy melodies and fancy techno-ish drums :)
theblackhawk--_--
Hey there dude, thanks for the review. I'm glad you liked it, and I may publish the version that I fixed with your comments. Listen to some of my other stuff, as I will yours.
Later
here yo review man...
...the phased sttrings and way over FXed instruments were really nice.
The water drops were a little too loud or SOMTHING cause it seemed like it didnt fit.
Then it had a nice propelling beat that fit into industrial.
wow that was ... EVIL!
i love that part, but i dont know y everyone uses that crash sample... i honestly hate that damned crash sample, but ill live with it if its all you got dude.
try looking for another one.
The high hats were nice, very loose yet tight feel... or could just say that they sounded 'fresh'
The guitar was nice, and really, REALLY dirty.
i like that.
doesnt really fall under rock... this song doesnt fade into trance and then into rock dude.
This is dark wave ambient fading into industrial!
NICE
i gotta try this somethime soon.
The string just adds straight to the beat.
The guitar started to sound misplaced now...
Like it was random.
And then either the song just STOPPPED or it restarted.
well, buddy, theres a review 4 ya.
hopefully i covered the whole main grounds.
theblackhawk--_--
mcuh greatful ness. i thoguht about the loud crash didnt really sound that good. the blur effect wasnt very nice. every uses that cuz its in dance, i am more of a fpc |cymbals fan. thanks for the review. appreciate it. =].
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